Trails will be pretty good having now had a couple of days to dry out.
The sequence you've roughed out is pretty good, except you missed 3, which is a nice little link between - logically - 2 & 4/8/9. When you exit 2 (Rock Salt) & hit the fire trail, swing right at the nearby junction rather than left & down, and about 40 metres in on the left is Slippery Gypsy (3), which gives you a good run into Wombat (4). When climbing High Roller (7), bear in mind it terminates a little short of the main upper junction, so you're faced with a short but steepish (not as bad as Vomit further up, which you'll have to tackle on your way out) climb up the fire road. Although if you look carefully there are some not-officially-there links across to Pine Climb (6) to make the final climb a bit easier (but longer).
To get across to Deadwoods/Crits (10 & 11) there are a few options. Firstly, from Wombat Junction you can either just go up the fire road, or up Gypsy, 'cos it's two-way, then you can also do reverse lower Rock Salt, because the lower section is also two-way, but be wary for others coming through the other way. Lower Rock Salt will spit you out at the bottom of Vomit hill, no alternative but to slog up it. From the top of the hill, on the right under the low-hanging tree there's a little drop-in loop that connects to the intersecting fire road that takes you across to 10/11; hook a hard right after popping out of the drop. Alternatively you can go all the way up to the top gate & take track 12 across, or the roadside track just outside the fence. All three will run into the fire road that leads down to Crits/Deadwoods. Around the left curve there is a gate, which will most likely be closed; there's a little bypass to the left up the embankment. If you don't want to climb the evil fire road a second time, head down the hill, jump the gate & it will link onto the Hillview quarry road. Follow this down to Boundary Rd, turn right, then head back up through the park to get back to the top.