swaz
Likes Bikes and Dirt
Constructive feedbackI'm sorry but I cant help but take photos at Noosa all the time
Noosa by Andrew Kevin Benson, on Flickr
Noosa by Andrew Kevin Benson, on Flickr
Feedback would be great! Second photo annoys me because i accidentally cut the rock off at the back.
IMAGE 1
To make this image better I would:
Have the stair case in the middle on the frame and get high, something other than normal eye level.
The sky is not really interesting and there isn't a lot you can do about it. Times a few mins past the sun sets is good. Other times it's best to go when there is scattered cloud... its pot luck really. But more detail in the sky here would help.
The dead vegetation on the left is very distracting and doesn't fit with the other lean lines and smoothness of the rocks.
If you haven't already go down to those big smooth rocks shown on the bottom right of the image. They make for great black and white photos.
17mm of a FF camera will distort the hell out of the outside edges of an image. Go with 20mm. It's still super wide.
Image 2
The colours of the rock on the right are very eye catching, the rocks on the left not so much. Not sure if you own or used a circular polariser but this would help cut out the shine on the rocks and bring out their natural detail. Rather than just reflecting the sky.
The sky is a bit more interesting, but in terms of something different it is pretty standard. Maybe try moving back and only having about 1/5 of the top of the frame with sky. Especially when you have nice rocks and moving water you can motion blur.
Cutting the rock off isn't as bad as I think you make it out to be. Nothing wrong with something that strong visually just appearing into to frame. Perhaps making it the only thing in the frame would help in the future and having water blur around it like a massive island of cool red/orange/brown earth tones.